When we breathe together

Years side-by-side in a night

Champions, getting there




this is an erasure poem – made up of words from a newspaper article. Prompt from http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com


12 thoughts on “Waltz

  1. Kim Nelson says:

    What a lovely love poem, and who would know the lines were pilfered from the news! Nice work.

  2. Susan says:

    Champions in more ways than one, breathing together for years. Bravo.

  3. isadoragruye says:

    Wow, this is brill! I like how each line is almost a poem in itself, Champions, getting there, was a smart choice. Well done and thanks for posting to the out of standard!

  4. short and sweet – very nice

  5. Jim says:

    We’ve been watching them here. They almost do breathe together, some of them. Nice. 🙂

  6. margaret says:

    Practice makes perfect 🙂 lovely

  7. margaret says:

    The Russians, German pair skaters just blew me away

  8. Ella says:

    Bravo! I love your poem-you capture the event with heart!

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